I am writing a romantasy novel and I’m starting out with a love interest who was a previous ex. In the end, he will betray her, however I need some character flaws that leaves characters feeling uneasy about him. Any tips?
Last Updated: 27.06.2025 00:27
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He always cracks his knuckles.
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